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Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:37 pm

Make the best poems you can THINK of.
REMEMBER
make it up,
don't copyright,
its the LAW.




Here's mine....


"I gave you a pencil in kindergarden,
i gave you an eraser in 3'd.
And we saw eachother's in the hall.
I helped you up, when you had a fall,
but when you went and backstabed me,
I went through it all,
so meanwhile were going to 6th grade,
i saw you in the hall,
for the day was short,
for me of course,
you stabbed me in the
heart."


Rate, * or ** or *** or **** or *****
***********
least......greatest.
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Re: Poems.

Post by ChlØe♥ on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:48 pm

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AWESOME! xD
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Re: Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:49 pm

Thanks,
Make one yur self!
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Post by ChlØe♥ on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:50 pm

A poem O.O
I-I... eh..
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Re: Poems.

Post by jaylikespancakes. on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:51 pm

The first time i saw u i couldn’t believe how beautiful u were,
The first time I heard u talk I thought that the angels were singing,
The first time I saw u smile at me I thought u were an angel forgiving my life,
The first time u hug me I felt peaceful,
The first time u kissed me I felt like I was in heaven,
The time when u started loving me was the time my life started to have a meaning,
The time u leave me, I’ll follow u I wont make the same mistake of letting u go.
For my love Suns
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Re: Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:52 pm

ITS JUST


*starts tearing up

to sad... XD

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Post by ♫Sam!♫ on Tue Jun 15, 2010 8:09 pm

Once i was really mad
to the point that i was sad
so i took a cab
to the computer lab
and destroyed all the computers!!!

=)
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Re: Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:03 pm

lol*************
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Re: Poems.

Post by Logan on Wed Jun 16, 2010 4:14 pm

***.5
I'm a picky person xDD
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Re: Poems.

Post by Guest on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:26 pm

Every star up in the sky,
Is for a loved one who died,
So when I look up in space,
I see your smiling face.

I made that one up when I was 8. (:

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Re: Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:28 pm

****
4 stars.

i don't get the part where it says in space,
and what is creating the smiling face xDD.
no offence.
otherwise,
great job.
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Re: Poems.

Post by Guest on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:29 pm

I was 8.
And it makes sense to me.
Razz

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Post by Guest on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:32 pm

Love is a powerful thing
It can help you overcome any obstical;
Except love itself.

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Re: Poems.

Post by Captin1928 on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:41 pm

*****
nice.

I walked,
And walked,
And came upon a rock,
i tripped and fell as usuall,
and came home with a bump.

xDD!
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Re: Poems.

Post by Guest on Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:43 pm

Thank you Dr.Seuss!
And I have a wack of poems.
I will try to get some more on here.

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Re: Poems.

Post by HannahBoo(: on Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:03 pm

Ughhh
I SUCK at poems.
I saw a dog
then a hog.
I turned to the...fog?
and put it on my blog

XD Luffely huh?
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